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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Awesome work with this piece! I Just restacked it with my thoughts, but to echo them here, I loved how well-realized Elle was as a character. You gave her a ton of depth and great backstory while keeping the piece within the flash fiction word count.

That is no small feat! I also loved how distinct the voice and tone were in the piece. It was a really fun read!

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Sana's avatar

Thank you so much! I’m genuinely having so much fun doing these prompts!

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Terrifying. Excellent work.

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Nick Winney's avatar

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truly horrifying!

really strong work!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Amazingly macabre. Love this type of stuff.

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Sana's avatar

This means so much coming from you!! 🙏🏽 thank you!!

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